07 August 2011

Angel


The memories are difficult to forget, the helplessness difficult to explainA loss is never justifiable.
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She rose above, with grace
She looked around with an elegance;
I saw this beautiful face.

I caught just a glimpse, a glance,
My heart, but leaped in dance.
Was it her or was it chance?

The radiance beat the midnight moon,
A sting passed through, a harpoon
the moment, I felt, had come too soon.



No words said, but yet heard,
Serene and silent, the moment passed
A thousand questions my mind asked.

She vanished into a haze,
Like the morning mist at the harsh suns gaze
Memories of her I cannot erase

A drop rolled down my cheek
Am I human enough to cry, so meek?
Where can I find those answers I seek?

Through the hue, I tried to pursue
I called out - "My dear, where are you?"
A lonely whisper, I heard - "in you..."

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In remembrance of a dear old lady who lived down the lane.

22 comments:

  1. Your verses.. touching.. Your dedication.. heartfelt.. You rock Superman!

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  2. One of your best poems!
    -Vineeth

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  3. Thanks Balzi.

    Thank you Ms Raman. Appreciate it.

    Vineeth - Thanks dude.

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  4. I think this is your best work till date, bud..Loved it!

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  5. Very nice poem!! I liked all your poems and stories but this one is amazing. I couldn't leave from here without appreciating!! and a big Congratulations!!!!
    - Ambika Aunty

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  6. Thanks Ambika aunty. Coming from you, this means a lot!

    And thanks! :)

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  7. Man its good to see your poetic side. Wanting to see more of the poetry where this came from :).

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  8. reading it over n over again :)awesome one :)

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  9. Wow ... Your best work till date !

    - Vinay

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  10. Awesome. Can't believe its up there for a year and I had not read it till now. Its Beautiful.Loved it.

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  11. Chaitra, Vinay, Ujwala - Thank you! :)

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